Where is Chapter 5?

Well summer is almost over and it is time to get back to work! Screenhog has been busy working on the latest Mech Mice prototype, we should have another video next week. Cale continues to draw amazing illustrations of the Mech Mice world, I can't wait to show you the "bar fight" illustration. The Miller Brothers are busy finishing the first Mech Mice book, and we hope to have the book sent to the printers by the end of this month. (Stay tuned) I have been busy working on the new (boring) RocketSnail website.

So where is chapter 5?

Based on all your feedback we have decided to make a couple changes to chapters 1-5.  Starting this week I will re-post all the chapters for you to read.

Why the changes?

Seems alot of our girl fans did not like Magenta, so we decided to rewrite her character and make her Ziro's lieutenant (2nd in command).

Keep posting your comments!

The Mech Mice Story – Chapter Four

CHAPTER FOUR – RIDING THE W.U.R.M.

Nothing could erase the smile from Ziro’s face, not even the gut-wrenching anticipation of being rocketed two hundred tails per second on one of the most rickety transports ever designed. This was a moment he would cherish forever – the Genesis Squad was being deployed.

For the fiftieth time today, Ziro loaded the Mission Objective screen on his wrist communicator. The screen lit up with the details of the his squad’s first mission. He couldn’t help but let his chest swell a bit as he read it one more time. It read:

MISSION: 1 SQUAD: GenesisSTATUS: TOP-SECRET OBJECTIVE: RECON OF LIWA REGION ORDERS: SCOUT AREA, OBSERVE AND REPORT ACTIVITY DIRECTLY TO COL. BLACK. TRANSPORT: PLATFORM 99 AT 13:00 ACCESS code: I-IIII-II-I

Ziro lowered his arm and stared at the round door to platform 99 in front of him. The number was stenciled onto the iron in black paint.

“This is it,” he said, slightly winded from the long walk. “Behind these doors…our transport awaits…and our first mission begins.”

The new Elite Commander looked proudly over his squad. Streak, Magenta, and Nightshade were already standing beside him, dressed in full battle gear and ready for action. Demo was the last to arrive; his pilot’s jumpsuit already soaked in his own sweat from the long winding hike through the seemingly endless passageways that had led them here. He gasped as he arrived, clutching his side as he closed the final fifteen tails between him and the rest of the squad.

“I thought…we’d never…make it,” the big mouse panted. He covered his mouth and burped loudly. “Phew! Remind me not…to eat so much…before a mission…next time.”

“How many platforms are there anyway?” Streak wondered aloud.

“This is the end of the line,” Nightshade answered. Pointing to where the tunnel came to an abrupt end only a few dozen tails further ahead.

“Better last than never.” Ziro said as he reached for the door. He flipped open a hidden panel in the door revealing sixteen unmarked switches in four even rows. From bottom to top he toggled the appropriate switches in order.

First row: switch one. Second row: switch four. Third row: switch two. Fourth row: switch one.

A moment later, the mechanism that secured the door began to click. The door opened. The team stepped into a large but crowded room. The entire space was a cluttered maze of dusty crates and an odd assortment of supplies. A midst the collection there were coils of ropes, a pile of rusty springs, reams of flypaper, barrels of tree sap, boxes of rivets, a few over sized gears, some metal tubing, several bags of expired food rations and a crate of greasy rags to name just a few items.

“Is this some kind of joke?” Magenta eyed Ziro with more than a hint of suspicion. She didn't like being teased. Ziro scratched his head in bewilderment, “No. This is the place, alright, I must have double checked the Colonel's orders a dozen times.”

“What a dump. It doesn’t look like its been used in years,” Demo blurted out.

“More like ever,” Magenta snorted, as she slid her claw through a thick layer of dust which covered a wooden crate beside her. “What a waste of time.” She turned to leave.

“Wait!” Ziro replied fanatically, refusing to let his team give up. He raising his wrist communicator once more. “I'm sure there is an honest explanation. I'll contact the Colonel and get things straightened out.”

“Commander,” Nightshade said in a hushed tone. “I hear something.”

With ears up everyone listened to the faint sound of an electric sizzle, accompanied by the occasional metal clank of a tool. Somebody was working nearby.

“The source seems to be coming from the other side of these crates,” Nightshade added.

Led by Ziro, the team wound their way through the heaping piles of cluttered junk. It was a much deeper room than it first appeared. Eventually, the mess thinned and gave way to an open platform alongside a massive tunnel which stretched into infinite darkness in either direction. Along the ceiling, a series of tunnel-sized harness rings hung from a singular rail. These were the connectors that allowed the diverse selection of modular transports to be deployed down the tunnel.

It was an ingenious system, really, devised by the Mole Guild as a means of delivering troops and supplies to the far corners of the Migeddo valley. Unfortunately, the container that had been chosen to carry Ziro's squad was a far cry from the sleek new transports that were available to most.

A pair of iron-ribbed, cylindrical containers had already been connected inside their rings. There was nothing attractive about them. they had all the appeal of a pair of tin cans tipped on their side, punched with a few portholes for good measure. The Mech Mice insignia was flaking off on the side near an open hatch. Clearly, this particular transport was more than a few seasons old. Demo wasn’t impressed.

“Ugh…WURMS,” he muttered, “of all the transports in the world we get stuck with a WURM. They should have scrapped these things seasons ago.”

Streak looked confused, “What’s a worm?”

“Technically they are U.R.M.S,” Nightshade answered pointing to a ID number imprinted on the side of the vehicle. The markings were almost completely faded away with age but Streak could just make them out. It read: URMS-23. “It stands for Underground Rodent Mobilization Sleds. But the entire system is so old they have a reputation of being …shall we say…less than stable.”

“Stable?” Demo snorted, “They’re a bunch of death traps, that’s what they are. Hence the W.”

“What does the W stand for?” Streak asked.

“Wretched, Wacked, Wonky…” Magenta explained, “depends who you ask.”

Demo smiled and gave his opinion, “or there’s my favorite, What-A-Piece-Of-…”

Before he could finish his description, a grimy mole popped up from beneath the transport and hoisted himself onto the loading platform. With a broad, jovial smile, he raised his miner's helmet and blinked at the new arrivals. He was a star nosed mole with enormous paws and brownish black fur.

“Oh ho, you must be them! The one’s Black sent, right?”

Ziro extended his paw and cleared his throat.

“Name’s Ziro…Commander Ziro…and this is my squad,” he said with as much formality as he could muster. The mole eagerly reached out and shook paws with the mouse, transferring the grime from his own paw to Ziro’s in the process. “I’m Rudd, maintenance engineer for the northern lines. Sorry bout the mess. I don’t get visitors in this area very often. To be honest, I didn’t think we still sent squads up to Liwa. Mostly this is the place we put all the stuff no one wants anymore.”

Ziro wasn’t so sure he liked the sound of that. After all, they were here now. Were they no longer needed? He pushed the thought from his mind and tried to focus on the mission at hand. He turned his attention to the vehicle. “I assume this is our transport,” he asked, in a somewhat broken voice.

“That she is, lad. And a finer piece of machinery you won’t find anywhere else in these tunnels.” No sooner had the mole said this than a metal handle fell off the door and clattered noisily on the floor. The mole picked up the handle and without even the slightest pause, added, "I was just finishing a few minor repairs on her when you arrived. I’ll have that back on in a twitch of a whisker.”

Ziro shot an embarrassed glance at his team. Their great mission wasn't exactly off to a glorious start. “Are you sure she's...uh...safe,” Ziro squeaked.

“Safe? Of course she's safe. She may not look like much, but she’s got it where it counts,” Rudd said proudly. He tapped the fallen door handle against the side of the sled. It echoed like a giant oil drum. “Even made a few adjustments meself.” “Easy for him to say,” Demo half-whispered to Streak, “It ain't his hide on the ride.”

Rudd noticed the concern on their faces but he didn't seem too worried. It's hard to rattle a mole. “Anyways, yer heavy suit and field supplies are being loaded in the cargo container. Why dont's ya go on in and find yer seats. I'll finish up the repairs real quick like.”

Ziro and Rudd exchanged nods and the maintenance mole set to work reattaching the handle to the cargo bay door. While the rest of the squad started toward the entrance of the forward transport, Demo turned the other way. “Oh yeah! Now that's what I'm talking about...” Demo gawked as a robotic claw arm moved across the platform with a large item in its grasp. Streak joined the big mouse to see what all the commotion was all about. “My first real suit,” Demo sighed, completely oblivious to everything else except the heavy suit being loaded in the transport. “Isn't she a beauty.”

“I guess,” Streak replied. He couldn't help notice a slight tear forming in the corner of Demo's eye but he wasn't about to say anything. Demo put his hand on Streak's head and messed up his hair.

“You know what they say, little buddy. The two biggest days in a Heavy's life are the day he first gets his suit, and the day he dies in it. Thanks for sharing the moment.”

“Well you can't die yet,” Streak said, playfully punching Demo on the arm. “We still have a WURM to ride.” “Oh right,” Demo said, sarcastically. “thanks for reminding me.”

The squad filed into the front most sled. The interior of the transport was a bit less of an eye sore, but not by much. There were two captain’s chairs in the cockpit, and four jump seats immediately behind them. It was tight quarters, to be sure, but the U.R.M.S. weren’t built for comfort – it was a utility vehicle.

Near the front of the vehicle, just under the four circular porthole windows that overlooked the track, lay a large control panel with dozens of flashing lights and a central monitor.

With the most piloting experience, Demo took the controls alongside Magenta and started loading the coordinates for Liwa into the auto-pilot. The others harnessed themselves into the remaining seats in anticipation of Rudd’s return. Ziro tried to relax, but he hated riding in these things. He’d only done it once before and had nearly lost his lunch. He spotted a safety card in a pocket alongside his seat and pulled it out.

"You do know nobody ever reads those things," Magenta said.

Ziro nodded. He pretended to drop it on his lap, but cast a glance down anyway when Magenta wasn't looking. It provided an illustrative detail of a typical WURM ride. The pictures were simply drawn and almost humorous in places if it weren't about to be happening to you.

The first diagram in the sequence portrayed a crew of mice strapped securely into their seats. Ziro put a mental check in the box. The second picture showed the rocket igniting and the vehicle racing down the tunnel tracks at nearly 200 tails per second. At this he cringed. Already he could feel his stomach turning. Below this, an insert illustration showed the passengers all smiling in their seats, except for one who had was holding a paper sack to his mouth. Ziro swallowed and tried not to think about it.

He skimmed over the rest of the pictures without truly paying attention to them. Even though he had only ridden a WURM once before, what followed had left an indelible mark on his life. There would be the sudden ratcheting stop as the transport reached its final destination. The crew would disembark the vessel and make their way to the chutes where they would be sucked up to the surface in a heartbeat. Ziro shuddered at the thought of the moments ahead and tried to remind himself that it was part of being an Elite Guard.

Even though this was only a training mission, he was now one step closer to fulfilling his lifelong dream and making his family proud. My how things had changed since yesterday.

Twenty four hours ago: Ziro had sat in paralyzing silence, nervously rehearsing what he might say to convince the Colonel to give his team another chance.

Ten minutes later: An explosion of paperwork rocked the quiet reception room, sending Ziro diving for cover and the Colonel’s previous appointment fleeing for his life. Colonel Black beckoned Ziro into his paper-strewn den and read the squad’s Training Report aloud. It wasn’t good.

When put down in black and white, the results were clear. Ziro knew if ever there was a time to stick out his whiskers and make a bold defense for his team’s merits it would have to be now. Surprisingly, it was precisely at that same moment, seventy minutes ago that everything changed. Without warning, Colonel Black tore the report into pieces, letting the bits of it flutter down to be counted among the growing number of casualties in his recent war on paperwork.

“Forget the blasted reports…you've got instincts, kid. Know what your problem is? You need to stop relying on all this worthless technology and start trusting your guts. The only trouble is...I'm not sure you're ready for this,” he had said.

“Sir, I was born for this,” Ziro answered confidently.

Colonel Black didn’t smile (he rarely did) but Ziro could tell he was pleased with the answer.

“Good. You have 24 hours until deployment,” Black replied. “Gather your team and complete one trial mission for me and I’ll consider keeping you in the program a little longer. Do we have a deal, Commander? Are you ready to be an Elite?”

Ziro remembered those last words well. It’s what gave him the strength to ride the WURM. He was ready.

“Well, that should do it, yes,” Rudd said, sticking his head through the side door, and startling Ziro from his thoughts. “The repairs are finished and the track is clear, see. Is everybody strapped tight?”

Demo nodded in reply. “Coordinates are set, we’re ready for launch, and it’s a good way to die if this rust bucket doesn’t hold.”

“She’ll hold, right,” Rudd said, giving the thumbs up. “Ears up, mice!”

“Ears up,” the squad shouted in unison.

Rudd smiled and slammed the door shut, latching them in the notorious WURM. There was no backing down now. No escape from the horrors of tube travel.

Demo pressed a red button, and the rocket engine began to ignite. He adjusted a few dials, as the roar from the rocket grew steadily louder. The entire transport started to shake and rattle from the building pressure of the rocket’s power. At times, Ziro wondered if the whole thing would rattle apart before they left the platform. Part of him hoped it might...the other part...

“Hold on to your tails, kids…this is where it gets fun,” Demo shouted. He released a lever and the transport shot forward like a bullet from a gun. Before Ziro could even say a prayer, they were hurling down the black throat of a winding tunnel toward Liwa.

"Yeeeeeehaw!" Streak shouted, clearly enjoying every minute of it.

Ziro felt sick...with each lurch and drop in the track, every turn or jolt, he could feel his stomach sickening. Even so, he couldn't force the smile off his face. It was the best moment of his life.

Mission One had begun.

Notes: The RocketSnail team is currently developing a new game called Mech Mice. Our first task is to create a world, full of characters and stories. We plan to launch the game in the next 2 years.

The Mech Mice Story - Chapter Three

CHAPTER THREE - OLD SCHOOL

Colonel Black bit hard on the squirming grub and frowned as he chewed. It was too sweet, he much preferred bitter bugs. He set the remainder of his meal back on his plate and scowled at the blabbering fool who sat across the desk from him.

Nothing about the grey field mouse impressed the Colonel. He was a new face, but still a stooge. One of those overdressed, underprepared, delivery mice sent down from the General’s office. The grub smelled of cheap cologne and was rambling far too long to keep Black’s attention. He had started talking three minutes ago and the Colonel could tell they were no nearer to the real reason this mouse was even here.

“As you will see from my report, Colonel,” the young mouse boasted as he pushed a large pile of paper across the desk, “Increasing our patrols of the southern meadows has been very productive. The tribes there seem very grateful for our presence and we’ve managed to liberate quite a few of them from all kinds of beasts. Alpha is very pleased with the results. His popularity has grown considerably among our great Colony. Despite the dwindling number of recruits it's our hope that…”

Black was getting impatient. “By my uncle’s whiskers, would you spit it out already? I haven’t got time for this nonsense, and I could care less what is in your report. I’m here to do a job, I suggest you do yours and tell me what you came here to say.”

The mouse trembled a bit and nervously wiped his brow. Black may have been a small shrew, but he never let anyone push him around. He knew this pup was only a glorified messenger, but that didn’t mean he had to make his job any easier.

“Well…Sir, General Hatchet feels that increasing the number of Elite Guards by six squads before the new moon could be just the thing we need,” said the mouse.

“Six squads,” the Colonel bellowed.

“Yes sir, after all, the Elites are our most visible and marketable assets. With more Elites in the field, more mice may be inspired to join. After all, the General wants the largest army ever assembled ready before the first snowfall.”

“The General is a buffoon!”

“I…beg your pardon,” the messenger said, clearly shaken by the boldness of this little Shrew in expressing his opinions.

“You heard me!”

The Colonel lowered his bushy eyebrows, picked up the thick stack of papers and waved it in front of the messenger’s nose, “Tell me, son, where exactly does this magical report suggest I find enough mice capable of bearing the responsibility of six Elite squads?”

The question caught the young officer completely off guard. He hardly knew what to say.

“That’s not really…”

The Colonel interrupted, his voice rising as his agitation with his situation grew.

“Not everything is about numbers. Whatever happened to strategy, to tactics? Do you even know what it means to be an Elite Guard?”

The messenger squirmed in his chair, but said nothing. Like a wind before a hurricane, the Colonel was just getting started.

“Our Elites are highly trained combat units, masters of stealth, fearless fighters, capable of survival in any environment. They are battle hardened, tough tailed, killers who’d rather cut off a paw than lose a mission. That’s the kind of mice I need!” The Colonel’s ears were now burning red. He took a deep breath and continued his tirade, spitting furiously as he shouted. “The mice I have are a bunch of sloppy, spineless, rookies who rely far too much on these fancy new tech-toys the General keeps giving them to figure anything out on their own. They wouldn’t know real battle tactics if it kicked them in the tail. That’s the mice I have.”

There was a long silence as the messenger measured his next words carefully.

“Surely there must be some among the grunts who you could promote.”

Before the Colonel could respond, the communicator on his desk interrupted. A small screen lit up and the face of Mildra appeared.

“Colonel, Commander Ziro is here to see you, sir,” she said in a decidedly drab voice.

“Make him wait,” the Colonel shouted, but Mildra didn’t disappear.

“Uh sir,” the young messenger offered, “you have to press the red…”

“I know what I’m doing, you twit,” the Colonel said. He pressed the red button and all of a sudden a second face lit up on the screen. It was his wife.

“Oh, hello Smoochie,” the shrew on the screen answered. “I wasn’t expecting you to call so…”

“Blast,” the Colonel shouted as he pressed another button. This time it was Mildra again.

“Sir…did you want me to send him in?”

“No! No…for crying out loud…NO!” He slammed his fist against the machine and her face disappeared at last. This was exactly what was wrong with the world today. Too much technology, too many contraptions. The Colonel sighed and looked back at the messenger mouse who was sitting across from him, mouth agape and eyes wide with shock. The mouse quickly regained his composure and extended an olive branch to the befuddled Colonel.

“Listen, Colonel. I’ll do my best to relay your concerns back to the General, but with the Alpha’s approval already granted, I’m not sure there is anything that can be done about it. I suggest you do your best with what you’ve got and we’ll see if we can’t work something out in the meantime. Okay?”

For Black, this was the last straw. He hated being belittled, least of all by some pint-sized runt with zero field experience and a clear disregard for his elders.

“Get out of my den,” the Colonel growled.

“But sir, I…”

Black picked up the report that had started the whole ordeal and hopped down from his stool. He headed for the corner of the room, rolled it up and shoved it into the barrel of a device that looked vaguely like a bazooka. He cranked back on the spring loaded lever and shouldered the weapon, aiming it’s crosshairs at the now frightened Lieutenant.

“I said, get out of my den, and tell General Hatchet he can put this in his report next time!”

The mouse scrambled frantically to gather his briefcase and scurried for the door. All the while, the Colonel chuckled to himself and kept the cross hairs steady with the well groomed dunce. Just as the messenger threw open the door the Colonel clawed the trigger and sent a massive flurry of paperwork out of the barrel and into the office and the hallway beyond.

The messenger rushed out of the den toward the reception hole where Ziro sat patiently waiting.

“That mouse is insane,” he shouted at Mildra as he stormed out of the den altogether.

Satisfied with himself, the Colonel dropped his weapon, slammed his door and headed back to his desk amidst a snowfall of paper that made his office feel much like a snow globe. He sat there basking in the glory of his battle won. For a moment, it felt like the good old days when he was still in the field…still getting things done. He sighed.

“How did I ever end up here,” he said softly to himself. He let his eyes wander around the walls of his den. Every inch of it was a testament to the early days of war. Photographs of gritty battles and war-time posters hung in perfect order on his walls along with artifacts and weapons from the good old days. In many ways, his den served as a museum of memories from the age of gears and springs.

Yes, he was an Old World kind of shrew, with plenty of field duty and more than a few scars to show for it. The virtues of war were bred into his nature. It was a much a part of him as his tail. Like his great grandfather, Black had been Commander of the most decorated Elite squad in the Mech Mice guard history. The Venom squad.

Ah, those were the days, Venom could strike swiftly and silently. No one had seen them the night they infiltrated deep into enemy territory and took down the Dark Union. It was Black’s bite that had sent the dreaded Dr. Verminion, leader of the Dark Union, tumbling to his doom. Black was a war hero – a legend even. But that was long ago. Now, he was little more than a paper-pusher. A relic of war in a museum of his making.

How times had changed. Under the new leadership of General Hatchet it seemed like missions were more about meeting quotas, expanding the Colony borders and gaining popularity than it was about eradicating what remained of Verminion’s army. Many of the battles being fought now were un-necessary distractions. Too quickly fought and too easily won. He had been around long enough to know something was up. Why were they focusing so much energy on the southern meadows and hardly any to the north in Liwa? There hadn’t been a squad sent to Liwa in at least three seasons. And yet, despite the Mech Mice absence things had been quiet in Liwa. Too quiet.

Black had his suspicions. He even had the courage to voice his concerns before the Mech Mice council once before. A lot of good that did. It was what landed him in this lousy job stamping papers. If he had any hope of discovering the truth, he couldn’t do it publicly.

If only there were a way to put things right again. To prove to the council that the Colony was at risk of attack from the north too. Who was he kidding? His tactics weren’t needed anymore. He had quotas to meet – General Hatchet’s orders.

He glanced down at his paper snow covered desk and spotted a single blue paper. It was another one of those digital field reports from the battle simulator. This one was for the Genesis squad. As usual, the report was already graded by a central server. The recommendation was to dismantle the team and send them back to basic training. Normally, he wouldn’t even give the report a second look – he’d call the commanding team leader in and deliver the news – but this time, something made him pause.

He half-heartedly scanned the report a second time. Surprisingly, there were a few bright spots in the report, not Elite status by a long-shot, but not horrible either. They needed a lot of work. Then, a subtle smile crept across the snout of the shrew and he did something he had wanted to do for a long time. He made a decision on his own.

If it was numbers the General wanted, he would give it to him. He’d approve these less than perfect grunts and give them a shot at the big time. But first, he’d give them a special trial mission to test their worthiness. If they failed, he’d just be following orders. But maybe…just maybe…they’d manage to come back with something useful from the field. Liwa would be the perfect place to start. Nobody would be expecting it.

“Oh-ho-ho Augustus, you are a clever little shrew,” he said, chuckling to himself.

He depressed the red button on his desk communicator to call this Commander Ziro in for the news, but it was his wife’s face that appeared instead of Mildras.

“Smoochie? Is that you again,” his wife asked.

“Blast!” he cursed and slammed his fist against the device. The image went black.

He hopped down from his stool and headed for the door. He’d do this the Old School way.

Notes:

  • We changed Black's rank from General to Colonel.
  • The Chapter Illustration will be added later
  • If you find any errors or mistakes please post them to the comments